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Romantic love storry 💖💝💝
As soon as Fariha told her mother that at night......
Fariha's mother got angry......
Fariha's mother: How dare you get involved in this?
Fariha: Mom, everything happened suddenly, I didn't understand anything!! I can't marry anyone else except him??
Fariha's mother: Who is that boy??
Fariha: Mom ... Mahim 😞
Fariha's mother: Mahim means?? Which Mahim?
Fariha: Your brother's son?
As soon as she said this, Fariha's mother got even angrier and angrier
Fariha's mother: Are you okay!!! What are you saying?
Fariha: Yes, mom, it's true!!
Fariha's mother: Listen, I'm telling you directly that you have to marry the boy I like??
Fariha: No, I love Mahim and I can't marry anyone else but him!
As soon as I said this, Fariha's mother gave Fariha a s/s
tha/ pp/ r!
Still, Fariha kept crying and saying!!
Mom, I love him so much I can't marry anyone else but him 😢
Fariha's mother: Keep your love, you have to marry the boy I like and don't say a single word!!
Then Fariha.... lay down on the bed and started crying, burying her face in the pillow!!
Fariha's mother told Fariha that and left Fariha's room.......
After a while, Fariha called Mahim and said hello, Fariha's mother realized it and went to Fariha's room and took the phone....... and immediately hung up!
Mahim can't understand anything when the phone is taken away!!
He started thinking to himself what happened, why did he hang up the phone after saying hello??
Then Mahim started studying without thinking about anything else because Mahim has an admission exam ahead of him!!!
So then Fariha's mother......
Called Mahim's mother and then......
Fariha's mother: Hey, what's wrong with you, Bhabhi???
Mahim's mother couldn't understand anything!!
Mahim's mother: What happened, why are you talking like this, what else will be the problem??
Fariha's mother: You don't tolerate people well, do you!
Mahim's mother: Hey, what happened, should I tell you???
Fariha's mother: I'm telling you! I have arranged my daughter's marriage with a government employee!! Is your son cheating on my daughter? That's why Fariha is not agreeing to the marriage!
Mahim's mother: Tell me the whole story??
Fariha's mother: Hey, don't you know that if I told Fariha about marriage, she would say that I can't get married??
Mahim's mother: Yes!!
Fariha's mother: Do you know the reason for that??
Mahim's mother: No, right??
Fariha's mother: There is a relationship between your talented son and my daughter!! That's why Fariha is not agreeing to this marriage!!
I found such a good government job boy for your son, what is my daughter saying these things today!!! He can't get married (crying)
Mahim's mother: Okay, don't cry, I will hear everything from Mahim first???
Fariha's mother: Yes, it's okay... I won't tolerate all this, I said that if such a good husband is lost because of your son, then the future will be very bad!!!
Mahim's mother: Okay, calm down, I'm looking into the future!!!
Then Mahim's mother hung up the call....
And immediately went to Mahim's room....
Replies (2)
hello @abdur1. This story needs more development and to be finished. It feels incomplete. There is very little character development and no arc. It is centred on a conflict between a mother and daughter over their individual choice of suitor for the daughter. However, we never learn much about either suitor, and the emotional layers are not explored. We note that you have returned to The ink Well after some time away, and are still not supporting other members of the community in line with our guidelines. Kindly take the time to read our FAQ, rules, and guidelines, and ensure that you are adhering to them if you wish to continue writing in The Ink Well and for the community to take the time to read your submissions. This means, among other things: Ensure that you are meeting minimum length requirements, that your stories are developed and have a clear arc, that you have used correct grammar and punctuation, including writing dialogue with speech marks, that you are supporting at least two other writers in the community by commenting meaningful on their stories, each time you wish to submit a story of your own. there are other guidelines which you should familiarise yourself with if you are serious about writing short stories.
Thank you very much for giving me advice, I will definitely try to follow your instructions,