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PAIN
**O PAIN !!!**
A life without my statue
As I lie waiting for a change
Others shouting out of rage
I feel like am reaching my old age
Trapped in a cage without having to release my rage
**O PAIN !!!**
***O pain !!! What a feeling
A feeling that causes sorrow
A feeling that makes the road narrow like their is no way to tomorrow
With a hallow mind I scream
With a troubled mind I think
With a troubled mind I sink
My burden seems borrowed
O lord save me from so much sorrow***
***O pain !!! What a feeling A feeling that causes sorrow A feeling that makes the road narrow like their is no way to tomorrow With a hallow mind I scream With a troubled mind I think With a troubled mind I sink My burden seems borrowed O lord save me from so much sorrow***
**O PAIN !!!**
***Please what's to gain from this pain
It only puts you on a single lane
It makes you feel like you should be slain
It leaves you without a reason to survive
No reason to be alive
No reason to fight for one's life
To die feels divine
To live more of a curse
It makes one think what's left for him
Why wait why delay
To leave this world to its foolish ways***
PAIN WHAT A FEELING OF DISDAIN
BY BBONA
This is my first poem and am hoping to write more better than this.
Please feel free to comment.
Thanks for reading.
This post was inspired by @dobartim
I love the way you write your poems
They are inspiring.
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