Bass Guitar Jam on Donna Lee

Hello guys, I have been playing bass for 2 years and Im self-taught.
Recently,I have learnt Donna Lee song from Jaco pastorious and then I thought I should re-write this song with my imagination.
All tabs are created by me except the first 10secs I hope you like it guys! :) Don't forget to vote
Backing track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fVOTUXfqhhE