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Biting to love You
You have been pulling
My limbs.
Finally, you yanked them off
Like some fingers of bananas
I guess they were yummy.
As if those were not enough,
You came back
Nibbling on my trunk
While you gave that wry smile
As I wriggled in pain.
My sapless soul would be gone
Before you get there
For nothing is left for you to suck.
The remains, I shall archive
For reference purposes
'That guy with a sapless soul'
Now, I need a new beat for my heart
Because the rhythm has changed.
I mean one I could dance to
On sure steps.
And one that will not beat faster
When you lay your coquettish fingers
On me.
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For the past 3 years, i have been working around the clock to fulfill these magnificent words you captured. Guess what? Everything is becoming a dream in my sleep. It is nothing but a difficult task. Thanks for your words @harrywill.
Oh snap!!! What a masterpiece!
Hehe, boss me, I duff my cap bro🤗,
Saying u are good is an understatement.,you rock!
Nice piece, though the words are still ringing in my head.
Nice one bro
Really poignant, bro. Your words roll off like molecules of water down a pipe. 👍
I think I will have to come for poetry class hope you wouldn't mind to tutor me
Nice article bro....keep it up
Never knew you are this good in poem....anyways keep the good work up bro
He is a very great poet! One of the best on steemit! As usual dear, your diction, arrangement and imagery is great!
Wow. I'm happy I captured them as you have sought
Thank you guys. Your words are enough to prod a stagnant mind into motion
Smiles. Hello @robyneggs your works have greatly inspired me to say the least.
Lol. That image is just spitting encouragements
Lol. I prostrate sir. Your seasoned inputs in the science realm haven't gone unnoticed too. Keep it up
Lol. It's alright. I believe I'll have a lot to learn from you as well
Lol. It's alright. I
Believe I'll have a lot to
Learn from you as well
- harrywill
I'm a bot. I detect haiku.
Thanks.