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Bittersweet (A 50 Word Short)
A knife swings from delicate hands.
Her mind drifts while she cuts. A string of hearses passing by.
She’ll take the chance. Another Lemon and a firm hand grasps her from behind.
"Martha." He coos. "Your face...seems all too sweet to me."
It hurts. "It's Bittersweet."
He’s another lemon.
This is my entry for @jayna's #fiftyword challenge. The theme for this week was lemon
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love it, love short and sweet that is too the point
I also like lemons ;)
lol I hope the captain is aware of that
lemons and limes are awesome
in general ,.......citrus fruit is awesome
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This is very powerful in its subtle suggestion of risk, and how life seems to hang in the balance.
Well done, @idenkcall.
@idenkcall, just checking... did you add a link to the challenge post comments? I may have missed it.... Be sure to drop it in there, as that's a good way to make sure other Fifty Worders see it!
Thank you jayna!
I don't think I posted it there, but thanks for reminding me.