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When Crypto Rick Rhymes #1
Something I wrote today. Thought you might enjoy it, dunno if you can call it Poetry Slam
Thoughts persecution, ideas exclusion
The plague in our mind, some opinions are crimes
Our eternal demise, our success and our pride
They're all intertwined, when we're too stubborn we die
The lack of remorse, the shaming and force
The authoritarian regime, is here so it seems
Those pointless virtues, that meaningless praise
Those irrational goals, they border disgrace
Polarised camps, them versus us
Opposite protests and killings by bus
Private militias, ideological violence
Annihilate the enemy, or at least make them silent
Opinions are facts, and facts are opinions
Fakenews is legitimate so is alternative media
God is dead, and so's everything else
We're already buried just under ourselves
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Very powerful poetry slam.
You should perform it. There are a few bars in TLV that have regular competitions.
HOT! I didn't expect this!
Nihilism
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Depressing and strong. You should write more of these.
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Wow mate, this is really really good and deep! I like the hint to Nietzsches §125. If you have more political-ethical poems like this, don't hesitate to post! Want more! Definitely 100% upvote.
Oh man, I wish my english would be more sophisticated to get to this rhyme-level.
https://render.bitstrips.com/v2/cpanel/a731cabf-2b32-4bb7-8aaf-2348f584ee16-91c529a0-7da7-4e7b-b9ae-7be8bc3f6e1b-v1.png?transparent=1&palette=1
I suppose that it is. Your point being?
this is good, looking forward to more original content. Followed.
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