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Sailing (an Original Poem)
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I would never want to hide myself
beneath the bushel of my past
like some wind that has lost its gale
like a sail that has lost it's breeze.
I shall find myself riding in tympani
upon the horizon of a solstice day
not ever longing for the morning
when it is the sunset that beckons...
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Are the spaces there on purpose? If not, leave it there, it makes it more interesting.
Yes, I put them there on purpose. I wanted to give a feeling of movement!
Works perfectly
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