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Nightmare beach
The sand became murky water swallowing me in a whirlpool.
I could see the sunset from below, its orange hues reflected on the surface.
Dad was still sitting on the beach, impassive.
I screamed in desperation, but the sea drowned out my screams.
Suddenly, his face disfigured into a macabre grimace.
His features melted into a rotting skull.
He opened his empty sockets in my direction and a sinister laugh echoed in my ears.
I emerged suddenly from those murky waters, drenched in cold sweat.
Mom's voice whispering “my baby girl” was the last thing I heard before I passed out.
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Hello, thank you very much for choosing us to share your story. We want to advise you to read the community guidelines. We look forward to reading from you again here. 😈
Greetings Jason!, you are welcome to the Spooky Zone to share your horror stories. One of our internal rules is that the posts must be at least 350 words, you can take it into account for future entries, we are waiting for you in the Avernus of Hive...
Thank you for reading them, I will read them and put them into practice.
Thanks for the welcome and recommendation, I will take it into account for the next post.
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