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Pandemonium (Freewrite Day 95)
The lights were bright, and a classical piano music was playing. Jack adjusted his suit and glasses and started what he had been ordered to do: walk around and look at all the faces of the men in the hall even if it was for only a second.
All the men were wearing black suits. How was he going to know if he had already looked at someone?
Ahead, a man standing with a lady wearing a red dress stared at Jack as though he knew what Jack was up to—as if he knew the glasses had a camera and some officers were in a van outside the building monitoring all Jack was seeing.
His phone beeped and a message popped up on the screen.
He says that’s our target beside the lady in red. Get him!
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A fine piece of writing and an interesting tale.
Standing in for Marianne with today's prompt for you
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-97-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-bowl
Inventive use of the prompt. I like the story you created, it flows well.
a very different take. I like it!! Welcome to the freewriters!!
Hello @naquoya. Thank you.
Thank you @dierdyweirdy.
Thank you!
I'm glad to be part of the group.
I have included this post in this weeks edition of The Library - a new curation post for writers and readers. Thanks for the great story.
Thank you for including my story in The Library. Thank you.