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Broken People
obsession
possession
powerlessness
silence
as traumatic experiences do
it binds and grasps so strongly
but can also tear us apart
shipwreck
the man without a vessel, a solitary plume
overwhelmed, untouched
A world of shipwrecks,
there is hope, and uncertainty
creative space for silence, and pause
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beautiful! the description of men a 'shipwrecks' really appeals to me. i also love the line where you say that 'there is hope'; the way the poem ends on a positive note shows how despite all the negativity and havoc all around us, at the end of the day (poem in this case) light will always triumph! i will check your profile out for more. if you are interested, i have poetry i wrote on my profile too :)
Thanks for the kind words and I'm so glad you made that connection about shipwrecks :) I'll definitely give your profile a read too.
You're welcome!!! And thank you! :)
Very nice, Will be looking forward to your posts.
Up-voted :-)
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Thanks for stopping by :)
I like this post, you have my vote, by the way,
thank you for stopping by and voting on one of my post
really appreciate it.I started following you @mannyfig1956
More please. Followed.