Community post
POETRY ~ YOU SAID
"You said"
Original Poem by @missworldwideweb
You said I'm pretty and funny.
I smiled.
You said you really like me.
I smiled.
You said you're afraid to loose me.
I smiled.
You said you're a friend of mine.
I smiled.
You said you'll sing me a song tomorrow.
I smiled.
But today things left were only those words you've said.
You suddenly disappeared.
I cried.
Replies (13)
I like your poems! let's follow eachother to help eachother out?
@ngomez thank you :) will do. Followed you bu the way. You're a developer? 😱
Great poetry. I like your style and especially the ending. Is this a poem written from personal experience or a moment of inspiration?
@rivercityguy thank you for the compliment. Well, it's a combination of those two haha. Are you into poetry as well? Followed you btw :)
wow I think I will idolize the way you write kabayan.. :)
@gigipeh thank you. Just some random words during breaktime. Can't wait to see your posts :)
Awww... paasa moment!!!😭😭😭
True </3 shekeeettt
I always had love for poetry, and I actually started to write in english recently, taking in account that it isn't my mother tongue.
ouch ..sakit nmn nun
same here, english isn't my mother tongue as well but I just love writing poems. I should check your poems :)
@migztaraki ehehe sagad :)
I do my very best, kinda studying development right now. Just sharing my basic knowledge withthe community :D