justice undone

My words jump out of my mouth in hope of commiting suicide
but they land on paper and are forced to live forever
and that is the saddest thing I've ever had to witness

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Pleiades Rising

@as-i-see-it·Dec 26, 2017, 4:19 AM UTC

Welcome Back! :-)
I am so happy to once again read what you have shared.

In my own way... I understand this poem... It is Beautiful and it is also sad. At least to me. It seems to connect to my own inner expression...

I like the way your words have landed upon this page and I am glad that they live. May sadness turn to sunshine.

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r a x e i r a

@raxeira·Dec 26, 2017, 2:44 PM UTC

As long as you enjoy my writing, I will keep posting. Thank you, thank you, than you... <3

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Pleiades Rising

@as-i-see-it·Dec 26, 2017, 6:40 PM UTC

You're very Welcome and Thank YOU for your reply! :-)

I am very Happy to read that you intend to keep posting, since I Love the way your expressions find life in the vehicle of page/monitor/electron ink as they journey through time and space on their way into my mind. I have a lot to look forward to.

But No Pressure... Only when you really feel like it. I know you must be seriously busy with other things, like school, life, and etc. :-)

Thank you again for your reply and for sharing your creativity! :-)
Wishing you happiness, smiles, sweet dreams and sunshine! :-)

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