Community post
When The Soul Screams
Pry open my mouth dear God.
force me to breath.
Fill my lungs with hope
Return the strength to my feet.
Remove these awful chains from my heart
that bind love inside of me,
I do not know myself anymore
Fused eyes can not see!
Dear God, I’m on bended knees!
Pry my eyes!
Unleash the light in front of me
Save my soul from hell’s reach.
Replies (9)
oh my ! nice work my dear. resteemed!
if you have whatsap or telegram , will it be nice to build a team on there where we can have people and vote eachother ..what do you think mom?
That would be awesome! lets connect!
Okay .. Good .
Joim me on here
https://t.me/joinchat/I1h--w-NtEhGtO6dnLKD7A
Then we talk better
It says it's not available?
You are very expressive and you have the strength of words to make them alive and convey the feelings. I am glad to have visited your blog. You are a very skilful writer. I connect to your expressions. Awesome!
We run a group, "SteemBulls" on Dicord. I would request you to join it. We are a family there and you will feel like home. That is my word :) It will also provide you with a platform where you will get exposure. Come, join us! https://discord.gg/qzgpG3
@takenaback, thank you for supporting @steemitboard as a witness.
_Click on the badge to view your Board of Honor.
Once again, thanks for your support!
Do not miss the last announcement from @steemitboard!
Wow thank you so much for your compliments! I have a lot of emotion in this piece so it means a lot. I bared my soul. :)You made my day!
Same i wanted to say when I read ur comment on my blog :) U did made my day :)
I'm so glad! What a gift it is to make someone's day. I meant every word. I have always had a passion for words, and when they carry sediment, that's power.