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Peach Blossoms
Blossoms promising
Such sweetness come midsummer
Hold crisp frost at bay

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Blossoms promising
Such sweetness come midsummer
Hold crisp frost at bay

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I enjoyed this piece. You did a great job of putting the reader in the moment and allowing us to see and feel the season. Great write.
Thanks! I'm finding these haiku are great reminders of those moments.
It has a nice rhythm to it.. if it only were true as well ;)