The Rich king And The Poor Hunter

A king ruled a kingdom known as the kingdom of wealth.
The king was rich as his kingdom was wealthy,he loved only the Rich and strong and had no compassion for the poor and weak.
This made the poor to somehow hate him.
Two years since his reign, the king fell ill and the kingdom was divided into two,those that loved him and those that hated him. A native doctor was called to check the king's health but all to no avail.
The only solution was to kill a lion for sacrifice.
When the villagers heard this,they were scared cause no body would risk his/her life to save the king.
But a poor hunter offered to go not minding if the king was good to him or not
The villagers doubted his ability to kill a lion if he can't even kill an antelope. But he encouraged himself and went on the search for a lion.
Few weeks have passed and the hunter hasn't returned, everybody is sad and scared of loosing their king, But after nine week, the hunter returned with a dead Lion to save his king, the villagers were surprised and sorry to have underestimated him. The chief priest was called again to carry on with the sacrifice.
And the poor hunter became the talk of the town both far and near cause he saved the life of the king
and his life changed from zero to one hundred...........

                * THE END*

MORAL LESSON: *Don't allow people's comment to bring you down
*Don't give up on yourself
*Perseverance leads to success

Thanks for reading*********

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